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The end of this is sexual and i know some of you wont like that. Im actually kinda nervous in posting it. i was just trying it out to see how i liked it in my rap. i didnt know what words were safe in the ending part so i just kept it safe. i even censored sucking. tell me how you like it.

“Some Words”

Written by Mike Petrow

Im toxic like Britney spears

Toxic like too many beers

Im toxic like poison in your food

I don’t mean to be rude, but its time to conclude

Your life, if you can even call it one

Im chargin up now so you better run

It’s not games and it’s not fun

You thinking im a crazy rapper but im aware I am

Ready to do anything I want, like I was bam

Which includes: knockin you out, slammin you down

My punch goes around but never comes around

Here’s my sound

(Cuts)

I got twice the flavor like double mint gum

You want the old me back, like what have I become

Famous, a jerk, I cop an attitude

Sorry im a teen im supposed to be rude

It’s what we do, it’s not like I do it for fun

I don’t play with AK’s I got a cap gun (haha)

Listen to me, 100 words a minute

It’s like im gone listen, to the DJ spin it

Before this I would be like “what to do”

Sitting in my basement playing ps2

Put now I walk the street, with a particular beat

Swag’s the word that they use for that

Walkin, pick up the phone, (ring) “where you at?”

Im the only new rapper without “lil” before his name

Like im the only original cat to enter the game

I spit fire you might get burned

Put down that mic boy, just wait your turn

And by the end of this maybe there’s something you’ll learn

Some words of wisdom like keep your head up, stop your crying

If you’re going for a dream you gotta keep on trying

If you never stop tryin then you’ll never fall

If you never try it wasn’t worth it at all

Edited by WILL IS ILL
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Some Words is rights.

"Im toxic like Britney spears

Toxic like too many beers" - I know your just starting but I'd change the 2nd line to 'Leave U intoxicated like too many beers'.

"I got twice the flavor like double mint gum" - that was a cute lil line.

"Before this I would be like “what to do”

Sitting in my basement playing ps2" - Lines that really brought out how such a song would come about.

As long as ya havin' fun wit it, I see no problems.

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Im toxic like Britney spears
:lolsign: :lolsign:

He asks a slut for her number when she’s not even hot

He said he’d knew he’d get he*d so he said why not

He tells her “cherry, blueberry, take your pick”

Hahahahaha!!!! It's been a long time since I laughed so hard. Nice one man. I like it. :2thumbs:

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I like the "toxic like britney spears" lines everything else need to be rearanged your kinda all over the place when you rap.

1. if this is yfor fun keep doing what your doing

2. if your serious then this is a scrap

NO OFFENCE keep doing your thing

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I like the "toxic like britney spears" lines everything else need to be rearanged your kinda all over the place when you rap.

1. if this is yfor fun keep doing what your doing

2. if your serious then this is a scrap

NO OFFENCE keep doing your thing

A friendly advice, my dear fellow forum member. I don't think picking on WillisIll and J-O-E was exactly a good idea. :lolsign:

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  • 2 weeks later...

i changed the lyrics on the last verse cause when iwas recording i played it backwards for the hell of it and it sounded like "hell" and "i love satan" so i got really freaked out. so i changed the last part. which i like it better now cause tthe title makes sense. oh and for my audios: there coming. very slowly tho. i got one song done hahah "not yet famous". i just learned how to make good beats. so wait a lil longer.

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  • 4 months later...

I CHANGES THE FIRST VERSE AND ITS ALOT BETTER!!

my idea for this track is like you only remember some things from a stranger you met and forget the rest. so this song is like the some words you remember. the beat is gonna be a clock ticking.

Clock is ticking

remember some details like from a stranger you met

The rest of the **** you seem to forget

Words are poisonous

Toxic like too many beers

Toxic like Britney Spears

Toxic like poison in your food

I don’t mean to be rude, but its time to conclude

Today’s rap it don’t shake your soul

Like pop, hip hop, and rock and roll

Blend ‘em together and start the trend

Add emotion for a message to send

It’s like people nowadays don’t know

Where music came from, where music should go

Started from spirit now it’s about bling

Sex, drugs, money just about everything

That can be taken the wrong way

Weak weeks and strong days

Face problems like how you face danger

Be cautious, pay attention like a stranger

But the brave are stupid, they jump the gun

And the smart are weak so they turn and run

Ask yourself which one are you

If thrown in the situation what would you do?

Risk yourself or watch what you do see

Or end up safe but look like a pussy

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