Da Brakes Posted February 15, 2005 Report Share Posted February 15, 2005 I'm liking the whole story telling aspect of it. I think the rhyme scheme is very basic, where I could find it. I agree with Tim that I'd like to hear a version in your native tongue. That would be cool. But keep writing and keep showing us your work! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.