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my 3rd vers... need help...


willreign

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Let me remind you what you did for us to be together
I reminded you that I’m mister lover but it doesn’t matter
You better remember that time that you made me turn
And wanted your ex boyfriend 2 be burned
I haven’t stopped the beat, co’s my time is short
And I admit that I’m guilty in the freaking court
Honey from the last chorus I started to choke
And when I am without you my heart just lock
We are happy together from now until forever
Wanna get rid of me? Too late now (ha ha), never never
All my body get musty when I near you
Wanna share something? I’m here with you
Remember that we can live happily ever after
I’m breakable so try 2 b gentle, that will be safer
So let me remind you about that crazy churs
If you wanna jump into my bed I’ll say – of course
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OK... This is the version in more correct English:

[quote]Let me remind you what you did for us to be together
I reminded you that I’m Mister Lover, but it doesn’t matter
You had better remember that time that you made me turn
And wanted your ex-boyfriend to be burned
I haven’t stopped the beat, because my time is short
And I admit that I’m guilty in the freaking court
Honey from the last chorus I started to choke
And when I am without you my heart just locks
We are happy together from now until forever
Want to get rid of me? Too late now (ha ha), never, never
All of my body gets musty when I'm near you
Want to share something? I’m here with you
Remember that we can live happily ever after
I’m breakable so try to be gentle, that will be safer
So let me remind you about that crazy chorus [i](or do you mean curse?)[/i]
If you wanna jump into my bed I’ll say, "Of course."[/quote]
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I like this verse man... here are a couple of errors-your asking to correct them..

I haven’t stopped the beat, [color=red]co’s[/color] my time is short
Cuz


And I'm not sure what you mean by chur's.... but other than that you're good to go. Pretty cool verse :thumb:
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