mfuqua23 Posted August 15, 2004 Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 I just wrote this. I was listening 2 Hero1's beat and was gonna loop it. But then I just went ahead and wrote. I'm gonna just try it 2 different beats. I hope we can use Hero1's beat tho. [i]Aug. 14, 2004 (7:33 - 8:10 p.m.)[/i] Take a burning journey, 2 my time of existence Have every listener put me on their wish list Previous mic holders get dissed cuz they couldn't capture the attention that is spoken by a real rapper Ask 4 success, and shall U receive the best I'll take note of history, and still keep it fresh Gotta return 2 generations, wit styles and flows It'z not an unheard cry, it'z a rebirth 4 hip hop souls Feel the vibe of the individual Whether it'z sampled or original If their kickin it live, or on digital Know 4 a fact, they gotta love what they do There's dreams of being great, and take it 2 the next level If they can't take difference, then I'm gonna have 2 rebel The lyrics from my mind, sincere when I rhyme Do right 4 hip hop, I'm gonna Be On Time ________________________________________ There it is y'all. I hope ya didn't sleep on this collab. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 15, 2004 Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 (edited) Nicely done... I'll listen to Tims beat while reading that tomorrow to get a proper feel of it. I'm not sleeping on this... I'm pretty sure I won't be spitting a verse though... Might do an outtro or something though. Edited August 15, 2004 by Prince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 15, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 I didn't really write it 2 Tim's beat tho. But I tried rappin 2 it. It might work 4 me. I was gonna pop in my JJFP instrumentals and rap it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 15, 2004 Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 Hey mfuqua, nice verse, pretty strong flow, but hey what is the name of the song gonna be? Who's gonna give the song a title? Like I said before, I could post a verse for it here, but I don't have anything to record it with and the 1st songs that I wanna record are the ones I wrote already. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 15, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 Didn't u see my title? I was thinkin "Be On Time". Cuz we were gonna make it a hip hop anthem right? well, timing will be right. much like JJ+FP's arrival Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 16, 2004 Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 Very nice verse man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted August 16, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 we havent got a beat yet.. personally i'd like to call it worldwide or sumthin like that..cause we are touching all points of the globe on this one.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Daedalus Mortality Posted August 16, 2004 Members Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 :switch: dope! :switch: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 16, 2004 Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 thats a cool title!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 16, 2004 Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 [quote=Da Brakes,Aug 16 2004, 07:54 PM]thats a cool title!![/quote] Which? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 16, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 [quote=Prince,Aug 16 2004, 03:21 PM][quote=Da Brakes,Aug 16 2004, 07:54 PM] thats a cool title!![/quote] Which? [/quote] Brakes is talkin about mine, i think. "Be On Time". U know how they say time 4 a change, will think of that. Our hip hop will be on time. btw, Da Brakes and D.M., thanks 4 ya simple feedback remarks. :thumb: I don't think Worldwide would be any good, cuz that seems 2 common or easy. (if u know what I mean) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 16, 2004 Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 I was actually talking bout 'Worldwide'!! We should come up with more tho and pick! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 16, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2004 [quote=Da Brakes,Aug 16 2004, 04:14 PM]I was actually talking bout 'Worldwide'!! We should come up with more tho and pick![/quote] Come on brakes man. Worldwide is played out. I know that;z what we R, but still; it'z not necessary 2 name the track that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 17, 2004 Report Share Posted August 17, 2004 [quote=Da Brakes,Aug 16 2004, 09:14 PM]I was actually talking bout 'Worldwide'!! [b]We should come up with more tho and pick![/b][/quote] Read my post again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 17, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2004 Ok. OK. I'm not pickin Worldwide when we vote. Just so U know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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