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  1. I wrote two verses yesterday, my first verse didnt go well so I started again. The 2nd verse was done yesterday and I didn't change anything. Let me know what you think, advice is always appreciated...

    At It Again

    My lyrics are goin down underground

    Hear dope beats lyrics and sounds

    I'll turn all haters to one scene

    Firing back at U as strong as gasoline

    U heard I stopped rapping for a while

    Makin s*** just ain't my style

    Bass runnin through my speakers

    Another underrated MC bleeder

    I dont need anybody, I make it on my own

    Other motherf***ers been doin their s*** all wrong

    F***ed up lyrics with beats callin them songs

    My rhymes are hitting as strong as steel

    Mix my lyrics with beats, too strong to kill

    'If you still don't like my flow

    F*** off and I suggest you go

    Hot beats with lyrics so cold

    None of this s*** will get old

    Never forget the way the story is told

    I keep my s*** loud

    Even haters know how I keep it down'

    You don't have a line to rhyme with 'told'

    I keep my s*** loud

    Even haters know how I keep it down

    My lyrics are like rocks and stones

    Lines so heavy, it can break your bones

    Took time with and now it's all blown

    You'll see me in future ruling the throne

    You act like you hold the reign

    I'll give you lil something that can pop your veins

    My lines are hittin so hard

    Already got people treatin me like God

    Like the words that I'm spittin

    Nobody tells I'm quittin

    All of it turned out so deep

    Crazy lyrics that never put you to sleep

    Other people and music selling cheap

    Cuz they cheat

    They can't bring the heat with hot beats

    U hear my stuff in the middle of streets

    I'm takin it back to youth

    Never lie, always have to speak the truth

    Read my words line by line

    Outstanding stuff that always shines

    Written in two thousand and five

    Got the lyrics that keep you alive

  2. Friends and the tv series with Damon Waynas but I don't know the original title... It's AMAZIN'!!!!! :rofl:  :rofl:

    Probably My Wife & Kids.

    One On One

    My Wife & Kids

    Wayans Brothers

    In The House

    Kenan And Kel

    Powerpuff Girls

    Tom & Jerry

    Pink Panther

    Scooby Doo Movies

    Looney Tunes

    Celebrity Deathmatch

  3. excellent rhyme. :2thumbs:

    you seem to be getting better, and it shows here

    keep up the good work!!

    Yeah, who knew in a week I could get better. Thanks everybody. If it's that good, I might turn it into a audio track once I get a mic sorted. Thanks again for the feedback.

  4. Hey, I wrote some lyrics..poem today. Got the inspiration from Bow Wow's track Let Me Hold U. Decided to wrote how a guy treats a girl and then splits up. Let me know what you think and advice is always appreciated.

    Held Me Down

    It all began when I found the right one

    Was in the chillin in the mall

    U gave me your number and said give me a call

    U said “Let me introduce to my world

    Wanna do u right cuz u a beautiful girl”

    So I went home & picked up the phone

    He asked me if I’m all alone

    He told me to come to his crib

    I’ll never forget everything we did

    Next day we balled at the mall

    You were the best never let me fall

    We were like best friends

    I thought you’ll be with till the end

    There were no secrets, no pain, nobody playin games

    My whole life had changed and rearranged to an exchange

    My mother told me I was doing wrong

    I explained to her how to kept me strong

    Even your boyz thought you blowin me for dough

    But they don’t understand the things we know

    Next day it felt like fate

    Got close together and had our 1st date

    I told him he’s the one that I can trust

    And our love will never crust

    U kept me on the right track

    Were always there 4 me when I needed your back

    I knew you I would always do right

    As long as you’re right there on my side

    We flashed to your crib we chilled inside,

    We spent some time in your ride

    Days got harder as they flew

    Times & memories together always blew

    Day after day we went our separate ways

    Never came back to the same place

    We both drifted apart

  5. Hey, I wrote my first poem a week ago. Let me know what you think. Advice always appreciated.

    The First Day

    It all starts from the day of your birth

    That's when you were introduced to Earth

    day by day you started to grow

    week by week more and more starts to show

    as you get older things start to change

    everything happens in its own range

    as you get older

    your life will get colder

    and there's nobody for you

    to tell people all the hard times you been through

    all you see now is people with crews

    and you have many different views

    as it gets harder, you start to crack

    mad as you are, you get your own back

    you tried to kill yourself

    all you did was hurt someone else

    now you're dead

    everything has shred

    as we get on with life with our own way

    always look back to your first day

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