Turntable Posted July 21, 2006 Report Share Posted July 21, 2006 (edited) Whats up ya`ll. I wrote this in the last days.. Just sometimes a lil part and stuff. I think the first vesre isnt good and I might rewrite that. I realy think I improved on the second verse tho. And I`m not shure about the chorus ether. Let me know what you think. Thanks. The place is here, the time is right Its time for me to step my game up tonight This Hip Hop feeling, its runnin through my vains I wanna be big, I wanna change the game I never realy felt like I belong where I`m at Still I got influenced By people I love, people that care And its caus of them I aint going nowhere I gotta hold it down, for the peepz that believe In me, as a young, true Mc I keep spitting those values, working on my delivery Keep struggling with my raps, getting better and better Caus I wanna be a Mc, not just a regular rhyme sprayer Balance in the game, thats what I want I dont just wanna hear how many bitches you got Sometimes its okay, but I`m getting tired of it Damn, they say that **** all day.. {Chorus 2 times} (8 Ball Sample) This ain't 'bout who rap the best This ain't 'bout who got the most This is not no gangsta rap This ain't 'bout no pimps and hoes This here ain't no country **** Ain't no way to label this Let me tell you this, about the future of the game People might be unshure, but yo things gonna change Caus I discovered something, about having a voice As soon as you feel that, you wont think twice Your willing to pay any price, just for grabbing a Mic Still suckas keep fronting, wanna be hard Mc`s But when it comes on substance, they aint got **** on me They got a bight mout, but nothing to say Yo, Thats what I see on a regular base Acting the G way, is it realy necessary? Even the kids are showing that behavior allready Guys think theyr hard, they gotta watch theyr backs Man, I`m telling you, I been there, done that But one day I decided to include a message in my raps So here I am, delivering the truth Try to teach some values to the young, struggling youth Dont wanna sound like a preacher, but thats how it should be We should create a voice, united as Mc's. {Chorus 2 times} (8 Ball Sample) This ain't 'bout who rap the best This ain't 'bout who got the most This is not no gangsta rap This ain't 'bout no pimps and hoes This here ain't no country **** Ain't no way to label this Dont get me wrong, I like to go wild Aint nothing wrong with bragin sometimes Gangsta ****, bling, yeah I`m down with that Just think about balance, when you lay your tracks I know you wanna rock them grillz and brag about mils But something you just gotta slow down, to think about things Yall know there is some **** going down Ghettos are growing in every major town You cann see the coke on theyr noses, obivious crimes But they cant help it, yo, its theyr state of mind Yeah, there some **** happening these days, that we cant ignore People are counting on us, yo we are theyr voice You know its our duty to be down for them Caus yo, we aint just musicians in this **** We are representing a culture, way bigger than hits The youth need us, yo were almots like quit leaders So keep that in mind, next to you write a rhyme Peopel need you, & not only in the good times. {Chorus 2 times} (8 Ball Sample) This ain't 'bout who rap the best This ain't 'bout who got the most This is not no gangsta rap This ain't 'bout no pimps and hoes This here ain't no country **** Ain't no way to label this Edited July 21, 2006 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted July 21, 2006 Report Share Posted July 21, 2006 it was ok, i liked dis line the most "Caus I wanna be a Mc, not just a regular rhyme sprayer" but i noticed dat progressively the cussin gets higher Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted July 21, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2006 (edited) Yeah, but 99% of the swearing in this song is "ish". For example in the song "Hoping For Things To Cange" I swear allot, and more heavy. It depends on the issue. Sometimes I dont swear at all. Thanks anyway! Edited July 21, 2006 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted July 22, 2006 Report Share Posted July 22, 2006 I think this your best song yet (along with Sarah)! Balance is most definately what we need! What song is the 8 ball sample from? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 22, 2006 Report Share Posted July 22, 2006 Hey Turntable, your progressively improving, so I see nothing wrong with each rhyme you write. "Still suckas keep fronting, wanna be hard Mc`s But when it comes on substance, they aint got **** on me" - haha, that was good one. "So keep that in mind, next to you write a rhyme Peopel need you, & not only in the good times." - Very very nice ending. There's quite a significance in what you said there. Your style will adjust to how you want it along with improvements. About the chorus, I think you should scrap the last two lines, and make up your own that discuss "Balance" a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted July 22, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2006 Thanks, Realy aprreciate it! @ Ash: "Hands In The Air" is the song calld. @ Fuq: Thanks for what you saying. And the chorus: Your right, But if I wold do that it wouldnt a whole sample nomore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted July 23, 2006 Report Share Posted July 23, 2006 Thats good keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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