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Beautiful baby, New Song by J-o-e


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Ayyo, ive been away a while trying to get my own style, and my own flava to writing music at its best, even though this might not be a good example, im wrote this song when one of my friends could be pregnant at the age of 16......

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Beautiful Baby - by J-o-e

i remember this girl, at the perfect age
crack head dads, here begins the rage
babies born without souls, wheres the human race
same adreninaln pumpin when you standin face to face
fist to fist, knee to elbow, and then **** hit the floor
teenage pregnecies, fathers way out of the door
single mothers on welfare how can this be true
babies cryin in the distances of the wind, it was you
a tear drops down your cheek just like an avanlanche
smoking so much weed, addicted you almost smoked the branch
wont do your baby too good if you dont care
women are strong, makin us men come into this world naked and bare
you got a baby and you got to stick with it
your man left you so theres nuttin you can do about it
shouting and aggression you begin to turn red
wishin one day that you might unlucky be dead
keep ya head up baby girl im here for ya'll
sittin next to the phone wonderin if hes gonna call
so much worrying while we out on the hustle
i've experienced a girl, who had to have a tustle
she was pregnant, and this was in the uk
only 16, her life seem so far away
she's keeping the baby and theres no option of abortion
he left you standing there all cold, theres no caution
no warning that he will do this to you
remember that he loves you alot and will always do
so just before you go all crazy
just look at your child, its a beautiful baby

You made us see life
dont look at that ****ty knife
****ty life wonderin when its over
goin all crazy, about your beautiful baby

its a baby boy and he has the dad's eyes
people will realise when the dad lies
wont even give you a dime, now thats cold
was shoutin at everynight, damn you was told
it wasnt rape, but you could of accused him
christmas candles standin around the fire singing hyms
life seems better now, but theres a huge shock
not enough money, dont get yourself down
your man blew the ****in money on the night of a town
at 6 months he was your pride and soul
at the age of 1, you sent him out to get you coal
need to survive, your momma wont help you
she wants the oppurtinies for you
it ruins the commuinity and our society
if ya'll dont care, then why do you lie to me
lie to her, it dont matter cause its over
her body left under a range rover
her love was strong and she was the only one who didnt know it
a single women can change the life of one man
but back then, i didnt really understand
her boyfriend was an althete, a good one at that
i ****ed her up by tellin her some ****, now her man wants me whacked
i deserve what i get and i cant say i dont cause i do
**** this the stuff i said was that i love you
i loved her and now she had a baby which her mother isnt there
had some money of welfare, but went to do her hair
it dont matter if she couldnt see what she was doing
but all she needed was keep her eye on the game and keep puresing
her dreams and her hopes
but dont get caught up with all the dopes
just when shes sky high dont cry
even though she was crazy, she has a beautiful baby

chorus

two years later and now the beautiful baby
has turned to a child, but not as crazy
ass his mum was, i wasnt mad at her, believe that
even if shes gone son, i'll still got ya back
you the love of my lifes son, and i cant hack with bad feelings
just stay strong, nah i aint your goddaddy, he went away
got on a plane, and flew away, he wont be back another day
got that plane ticket, knew he was a coward so **** what they say
your daddy was full of pride and growth, a great man, he just got scared
it happens to lots of children dont worry, i shouldnt be sorry
lift your head up, you had a mum that was ****ing nuts
didnt want to kill herself, but had the fair share of cuts
on her arm, didnt want her to harm, herself so **** it your livin wit me
im here for ya, wat can you call me, you can call me j-o-e
you got to get a few things clear
that you cant think about your mum in a bad way, she was a dear
if you do say your mothers name in vain
i might flip and slip and go insane
dont diss my track, just remember gotta listen to the words
**** the words, like my mother****ing verbs
im a crazy rapper with money on his money
so if im broke dont be suprised if i aint kind
if i have money, im so ****ing genourous
after this album its gonna be so pennyless
so dont go crazy
son you was a beautiful baby, ugh

chours


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i do apologyze for the swear words, its my style, i dont diss though
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I like it, it's very deep, welcome back j-o-e, you're steppin' your game up! :bowdown:
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[quote=J-o-e,Jul 18 2004, 03:09 PM]im wrote this song when one of my friends could be pregnant at the age of 16......[/quote]
I will read this through properly later, but from what you told me over a month ago; are you writing this to try and cover your own guilt?
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nah, i aint writing this for my own guilt i broke up with my ex girlfriend prince...it dont mata this is a close m8 who is having a pregnacy scare, when she already has the worse family, i thought i would write her a song to tell her how i feel about the situation in hand

Peace

J-o-e
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Aight, keep writing man you're coming along, like G said, you steppin' ya game up. This joint would be better without the excessive language... I don't personally take offence from it and in some places swear words fit if you know what I mean, but it seems sometimes they've just been slotted in at random where you couldn't used better words to illustrate what you're trying to say.

But yeah, when I compare this to your rhymes from as little a time ago as this time last year it's blindly obvious you're improving as a lyricist although I would say you could've thought out some of the lines better as sometimes the flow of the thing is interrupted. I like how you wrote what was on your mind though, if you write about what you think somebody else could be feeling it always get's a fake sort of feel, but I see that in this you're very emotional; showing that through anger and frustration. Do your thing boy... :kool:

Makes me want to post up some of my latest rhymes...
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