just watched it again...very good. I would like to see if you could touch it up a bit...there's one moment I saw that seemed like the video clip shoulda been pushed back a bit.
Where he says "Why did my brother Sterling have to die at that age" he thumps his chest where he's wearing the Mandela shirt on, which was referenced in the previous line of "Why did Mandela have to live in a cage"
In the live version he places his hand on his chest as he says the word "Mandela"
Just something that I never noticed the first time but I noticed this time.
And if you could find some more clips to add, so you don't have that one sequence repeating three times it would probably improve this a lot.
Now, that being said. I have zero talent. I realize that and realize that it takes a lot of talent (in my eyes) to do something like this. So that's not a dig at you or a "Man, why can't you do better than this?" because it's done well...very well.
I'd just LOVE to see a finished version. You said yourself that it woulda taken a few more days to do it and you were probably amped to finish it. Now that you've had a break, I think you could do it even better (as this song deserves a bomb @$$ video) and really hit the emotional pitches on this song. I LOVE the Independence Day and Bad Boy clips where they are placed. VERY nice! the bomb hitting right as he said "The bombs dropped" was spot on, and I kinda chuckled when I saw the BET MOVIE AWARDS clip of Will, Jada and the kids.
Just some thoughts is all.
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Posted 24 April 2006 - 08:32 AM
Yeah, I can see what you're saying man. Actually the bit you talk about Will banging his chest, I catually did that on purpose, I knew it wasn't the correct line... I can't remember the reason though.
I won't be touching it up though, that's where I was with my skills then, and I was happy with it... I'm just gonna move on and do another video to the best of my ability. Otherwise, I'd be redoing every video I've done so far!
I won't be touching it up though, that's where I was with my skills then, and I was happy with it... I'm just gonna move on and do another video to the best of my ability. Otherwise, I'd be redoing every video I've done so far!
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Posted 24 April 2006 - 02:00 PM
I've just joined this forum and this is late but that Tell Me Why video is fantastic. I would have told you sooner but i was looking for a good DJJFP forum. This one looks great by the way.
Edited by switch, 24 April 2006 - 02:01 PM.
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Posted 24 April 2006 - 02:30 PM
switch, on Apr 24 2006, 07:00 PM, said:
I've just joined this forum and this is late but that Tell Me Why video is fantastic. I would have told you sooner but i was looking for a good DJJFP forum. This one looks great by the way.
With that being said...Welcome on board man! :1-cool:
Edited by fan 4ever, 24 April 2006 - 02:30 PM.
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Posted 25 April 2006 - 03:43 AM
Totally agreed! You wont find a better one than this! Welcome to the board!
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Totally agreed! You wont find a better one than this! Welcome to the board!
I watched the Tell Me Why video again, I hadn't seen it in a while. Amazing every time I watch!!
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Da Brakes, on Apr 25 2006, 03:43 AM, said:
Totally agreed! You wont find a better one than this! Welcome to the board!
Yeah I also agree and say WELCOME!!! :2thumbs:
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Posted 01 October 2006 - 03:10 PM
Sad,I think it's too late to hope for a official video...
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good stuff
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fan 4ever, on Apr 24 2006, 02:30 PM, said:
switch, on Apr 24 2006, 07:00 PM, said:
I've just joined this forum and this is late but that Tell Me Why video is fantastic. I would have told you sooner but i was looking for a good DJJFP forum. This one looks great by the way.
With that being said...Welcome on board man! :1-cool:
Yeah, have to agree here, too!Welcome man! :thumbsup:
PS: Here are never any people who fight about some topics or anything about Will etc. I've been here for a quite time now and neva have seen somebody cursing around, making trouble or neva have seen some people who start to get angry. U see this so often in any other board or any other general boards, too but u neva see it here! U can tell ur opinions without gettin any problems or trouble here. A very great board!!! :switch: :switch:
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god i love this video! congrats again jonny!!
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Posted 08 January 2008 - 12:45 PM
nice video and one of will's best songs too
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Posted 26 February 2008 - 01:55 PM
Hey Jonny, sumbody took your video and post it it on youtube man...
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Where is jonny? He completely dissapeared. Ive helped defend his video while he isnt here too. I hate people getting credit for other peoples hard work.
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Posted 26 February 2008 - 03:27 PM
It has been a while hasn't it! "JONNY......WHERE ARE YOU?"
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Back for the addict, The fanatic, The hype fan
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Back for the addict, The fanatic, The hype fan
Just me and Jeff tables and a mic stand"
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Posted 26 February 2008 - 04:33 PM
i havent talked to jonny in ages!
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Posted 26 February 2008 - 08:27 PM
I was askin myself the same question.... he hasnt been online for a while now, since december maybe, and 5 months without logging in to youtube....
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Posted 06 April 2008 - 08:18 PM
Awesome video! Great job. By any chance can you please reupload the video on rapidshare or megaupload. I love the video and I really want to keep it. The rapidshare link in the first post is dead.
