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"Clouded Reflection"


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Wrote this in periods 7 and 8. enjoy

“Clouded Reflection”

Written by Mike Petrow

Lying to a stranger I feel no remorse

No regret throws my mind off course

No one else to guide me I am my own light

Look for a star to guide me tonight

Cause with parents from 1053

Who don’t like rap or try to rap like me

Im the dead branch on my family tree

Im an army of one being all I can be

Inherited my open mind from father and mother

Expressing myself helps me uncover

Myself and my inner poet

They can accept my rap so don’t show it

So I stand alone, with no other support

Frie4nds telling me that I should abort

Now music is my only friend

Helps me deal with things I can’t comprehend

Lessons and stories help me open my eyes

My life’s good is what I realized

Times pass, and fogged glass

Distorted image of what I really am

Expendable skill with a future unplanned

(Chorus)

With a clouded reflection

I can’t see who I am

Shapeless thoughts like saturated sand

And if the mirror clears and I see my face

Ill finally be able to fill up the space

Leave me be, I need alone time

Not to relax but a time to find

Who’s instead me, dream who’s beside me

A talents a seed, and it grows into skill

And to pursue all that is a power of will

Some aren’t as strong as others

I see myself as just another

With high hopes and star dreams

All against one that’s what it seems

I wipe away some fog; I think I have a chance

Talking about the world at a glance

If a picture speaks a thousand words

Open your eyes and think of all you’ve heard

That’s a million words plus without a doubt

(Chrous)

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Im the dead branch on my family tree

Im an army of one being all I can be - I liked the way this sounded when I said it.

Now music is my only friend

Helps me deal with things I can’t comprehend - I feel that way too sometimes. Nice set of lines.

"If a picture speaks a thousand words

Open your eyes and think of all you’ve heard

That’s a million words plus without a doubt" - that is an amazing ending. Especially with the title of the song.

Nice quick song for you to do in school, and it had meaning. Very good job. Of course quickness isn't everything. I'm sure you know that.

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alright well im working on the beat for this now, its real slow. im having trouble placing drums on it. but ill get it eventually. i spit it slower too.

im rewriting a little, not any big changes, just little ones so it flows perfect

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