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Mike

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here it is

BUT BEFORE YOU OPEN IT, ID LIKE TO SAY A COUPLE THINGS

this is my frist recording ever, and its also my first beat that i made ever. i personally dont think the beats good, at least for a hip hop song. i think it would be a good gorillaz song or something. and there are a couple things wrong with the recording like my microphone moving, so youll hear that. but please give me ALL the feedback you possibly can. oh and i screw up the hat line and say it backwards hahaha...but try to enjoy :paperbag:

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EDIT: it didnt go on!!! its not working i need help

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http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0NM9FHS...G61LK32V59G1TMU

not too good, im planning to make these changes on the track:

-add more distoriton to intro riff and make louder

-add bass/ghettoness(sound untense) to my voice

-increase volume in voice

-rap the words correct..hahaha

-add hardness(more hip hop) to the beat

- make it more complex

- decrease bass noise

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like i said im gonna do all the things i listed... but im using this program called Magix Music Studio 2005 deluxe... its pretty good but not that good for beat makling so im using a keyboard too. but your still limited with that.

for the beat though, my friend showed me the song "destory and rebuild" by nas and the beat sounds really good for the song, but im not gonna bite it. im just gonna make it sound similar in some parts.

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