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2018 JJFP.com Peeps Cypher (Add To The Rhyme)

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I just came up with a bright idea to gets ome life back in this forum, I remember back in the days of the JJFP forum of the Numero Uno forum where there was a lot of creativity and that did a lot to motivate me,  I wanna bring that feeling back so without further ado here's a rhyme that i made recently, feel free to add on peeps, let's kick it off!!

as the clocks continue to turn
i'm putting stock into a concern
there'll be major props in the world
end of the days of hurting
the strain of the daily burdens
putting into care like nursing
there's destiny for so much more
time to release and live for what's in store
releasing the hammer on the dance floor
striving for peaceful ways instead of war
more time to open up the heart
instead of living torn apart
there's more of an added charged
manage the advantage large
2018 brings on a brand new start
this feeling rolls true to last
learning from what went wrong in the past
to bring on recording of more tracks
all the importance of a trained staff

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well since nobody contined it yet,i'll add myself some more with a march madness rap....

let me add this march madness rap

as the spring training also gets at bats

there won't be any slack

bringing commentary like sir charles, kenny, and shaq

this feeling will continually last

as the buzzer sounds
the love comes around
through the sluggish rounds
comes a more divine route
with ways of claim to be found
enough passion that won't drown
there's not a need to front
i was born during this month
on the matter to discuss
hot streaks come after slumps
the range of accuracy behind the arc
the inventive rhymer born in march
the visions of a creative spark
more innovative than those on the charts
the pace of the game lives large
no matter what you ain't tearing me apart
hating opposition wants the break up  to start
i'm not about to break off and slip
when i roll strong and come to grip
no matter what happens i just won't trip
taking control from the opening tip

 

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On 2/8/2018 at 12:47 AM, bigted said:

I just came up with a bright idea to gets ome life back in this forum, I remember back in the days of the JJFP forum of the Numero Uno forum where there was a lot of creativity and that did a lot to motivate me,  I wanna bring that feeling back so without further ado here's a rhyme that i made recently, feel free to add on peeps, let's kick it off!!

as the clocks continue to turn
i'm putting stock into a concern
there'll be major props in the world
end of the days of hurting
the strain of the daily burdens
putting into care like nursing
there's destiny for so much more
time to release and live for what's in store
releasing the hammer on the dance floor
striving for peaceful ways instead of war
more time to open up the heart
instead of living torn apart
there's more of an added charged
manage the advantage large
2018 brings on a brand new start
this feeling rolls true to last
learning from what went wrong in the past
to bring on recording of more tracks
all the importance of a trained staff

bask in the glory of the past
life moves so damn fast
getting older now less bolder
uncertainty reigns supreme
streams of consciousness
get lost amidst the raucosness
hosting all this history
looking back at you looking at me
eyes hold memories that weigh you down
colder lonely soul not found
trekking towards the end
closer to what we call death
travelled on highs now at the very depths
seen more wish I'd seen less
strains of life held with each breath
struggle on - this ****s a true test

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Busy doing life, doing it right
teacher by day, vigilante by night
saving women from a lonely bed
thirty-two, still messed up in the head
as crazy as the first day we met
with that said, let's break some bread
raise your glass, a toast to the past
to friendships that didn't last
to the people we lost too fast
to the assholes we can't stand
all the money we spent on rent
to broken hearts and shattered dreams
to growing up, a pain in the ass it seems
the writing's on the wall, but we keep going
heart keeps beating, blood stays flowing
the sun keeps shining so we keep glowing
bask in the light, let it in
it's the power we need to commit another sin



 

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nice rhymes brothers, here we go again....

now is the time to reach climax
with more premieres than cinemax
this individual won't slack
feeding off of physical contact
it's all on momentum like a contract
but it's a bigger dividend than supplied cash
your stock in the draft
is faltering to crash
i have all the upper hand
like having a nutricious supper in advance
a craft of victorious vision in circumstance
a message to those who aren't believing
in the flow to pursue rather than getting even
won't be begging at more people
at 33 my eyes are set on jesus
my hobbies won't leave me deceiving
penetrate my way towards eternity
every set of concern rolls deep
no,mention of any hurt on me
the best is ahead on each breath i breathe

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10 hours ago, fan 4ever said:

Busy doing life, doing it right
teacher by day, vigilante by night
saving women from a lonely bed
thirty-two, still messed up in the head
as crazy as the first day we met
with that said, let's break some bread
raise your glass, a toast to the past
to friendships that didn't last
to the people we lost too fast
to the assholes we can't stand
all the money we spent on rent
to broken hearts and shattered dreams
to growing up, a pain in the ass it seems
the writing's on the wall, but we keep going
heart keeps beating, blood stays flowing
the sun keeps shining so we keep glowing
bask in the light, let it in
it's the power we need to commit another sin



 

wow incredible man :clap::clap:

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10 hours ago, bigted said:

nice rhymes brothers, here we go again....

now is the time to reach climax
with more premieres than cinemax
this individual won't slack
feeding off of physical contact
it's all on momentum like a contract
but it's a bigger dividend than supplied cash
your stock in the draft
is faltering to crash
i have all the upper hand
like having a nutricious supper in advance
a craft of victorious vision in circumstance
a message to those who aren't believing
in the flow to pursue rather than getting even
won't be begging at more people
at 33 my eyes are set on jesus
my hobbies won't leave me deceiving
penetrate my way towards eternity
every set of concern rolls deep
no,mention of any hurt on me
the best is ahead on each breath i breathe

is divinity reserved for the trinity?
I'm living in sin you see
I been deceived god received
trying hard but not sure if I believe
I've stared down a path of rightousness
but justice failed me do I fight for this?
or give up on the path of enlightenment
sight seen heightened then repent
I'm drained I'm spent
walking through the deserts like its lent
I want to be a good person
but life's attacks leaves me uncertain
not sure if what I do matters
tried hard but ended in tatters
hanging on to a thread
bared my soul now need to be led
goodness overcome the evil
I don't want to be fearful
I want to lead out of the darkness
found the light and now I spark it
 

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