Turntable Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 Hey guys, I was gone because of the holidays and stuff, so happy belated holidays and happy belated new year to you guys! Anyway, I recently stardet playing around with some music software and this is what came out after a few hours. I realy wanted to know what you guys think and what I can do to improve it. http://www.mediafire.com/?g31yu0pz7jgmc29 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIsqo Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 I dont understand, is this a beat to rap over it or what? because it sounds like a guitar and a guy saying the same thing over and over again, and then it stops and comes back to be the same. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 (edited) Yeah well its more of a sketch, thats why it is only 30 seconds. I'm also not sure about the rapping, maybe you could call it song instead of beat. But it is not a guitar as far as I know, it is a bassline I sampled from Esperanza Spalding Edited January 6, 2012 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Its ok, but you need to bring the sound out better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 could you be more exact? Cause honestly I dont realy know what I'm doing haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 I think you also need to working on the timing. The bass and the guitar don't seem to be in time with each other. Once this is done you could start to build it up with some drums, keys etc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 It really feels like it's missing something. It doesn't quite feel complete. What program are you using? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 the bass and the guitar..? Thats one sample so I can not change the timing. I agree tho that the timing between the sample and the drums doesnt fit @ Silver: Garage Band.. haha. Iknow it's not much but right now I do not feel like investing money already Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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